Feedback — The Dying World

Your honest reactions are the most valuable thing you can give me. There are no wrong answers.

In one sentence, what is this book about?

When did you first feel pulled in? Chapter 1? Later? Or did you never really get hooked?

Did any part feel too slow or boring? If yes, which chapter or section?

Did any part feel rushed? Where did you want the story to slow down and spend more time?

Did the chapter endings make you want to keep reading? Which ending worked best for you?

Who was your favourite character and why?

Did any character frustrate you or feel unclear? Who and why?

The worker awakening — when the created beings start thinking and feeling for themselves. Did that land emotionally for you? Was it disturbing? Moving? Confusing?

The ending: did it feel satisfying, or did it leave you hanging in a good way? Did you want to start Book 2 immediately?

Was there anything you didn't understand? A place name, a political situation, a scientific detail, or why a character did something?

The Deep / Nammu mystery — the thing older than the Anunnaki hiding in Earth's water. Did it intrigue you, or did it feel like a distraction?

What was the strongest moment in the whole book for you? A scene, a line, a decision, a revelation?

If you could change one thing, what would it be?

Would you recommend this book to a friend who likes science fiction or fantasy? Why or why not?

Anything else you want to say? Reactions, feelings, comparisons to other books, things the questions above didn't ask?

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